TODAY WE HAD A GROUP ESSAY WRITING AND WE SUBMITTED OUR ESSAYS ABOUT HUMAN TRAFFICKING. WE WERE DIVIDED INTO 5 GROUPS. THE TOPICS THAT MY GROUP GET WAS "HOW INTERNET CAN HELP INCREASE OUR LANGUAGE SKILLS". WE WERE GIVEN 8 MINUTES FOR EACH PERSON. I GUESS OUR GROUP DID IT WELL :)
MY ESSAY ON HUMAN TRAFFICKING:
WAYS TO OVERCOME HUMAN TRAFFICKING
Human trafficking is a modern form of slavery. It involves controlling a person through force, fraud or coercion to exploit the victim for forced labor or sexual exploitation. (the hook-definition) According to research from Michigan University, approximately three out of every hundred persons worldwide were in forced labor at any given point in time between 2002 and 2011. (transition) There are few ways to overcome this uncivilized crime such as using media to give awareness to the society, government should tighten laws and improve the security level in our country (thesis statement)
One of the ways to stop human exploitation is use social media as a mass communication to give awareness to the public. (topic sentence) Nowadays, social media is a famous way to communicates and shares information with others. The power of social media is very strong that it can gives a deep impact or impression to the society. Some examples of social media that we can use are facebook, twitter and instagram. We can use these social media to spread the words about the exploitation. To illustrate, society can post posters about human trafficking on instagram.(supporting sentence) Thus, using social media can help to increase awareness in society about this awful crime.(concluding sentence)
Another way to overcome this barbaric crime is government should tighten the laws that are related to this crime.(topic sentence) As an institution that has legitimate power to control, government should tighten its law by giving a tougher punishment to the criminals. For an example, if a person involved in human trading, he should not only be given fine but he should be sentence for jail for the rest of his life. This is the best way to punish the human trafficking criminal because if they can escape their crimes by using money, they can easily start the crime all over again.(supporting sentence)Hence, the government as an institution that possess power to command should tighten its law to overcome this crime.(concluding sentence)
Last but not least, we can improve our security level to prevent from human trafficking.(topic sentence) From what we can see now, our country is lack of security and that make us feel so insecure. Government should spend more money on improving our security level. For example, they should set up Closed-circuit Television (CCTV) in areas that are high possibility crimes will happen. In addition, police should monitor places like airport more often because this trading usually happens there.(supporting sentence) Thus, higher security level can help to prevent human trading.(concluding sentence)
In a nutshell, not only government should take action but the society should get involve as a team to overcome this uncivilized crime. Many lives can be safe if we take precaution and crime rates will decrease.(suggestion) Like a saying goes, prevention is better than cure.(quote) If we ignore and let this crime happen, do we still have faith in humanity?(question)
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